1)
using the installer is typical faster → using the installer is typically faster

1.1)
https://eclipse.org/downloads/eclipse-packages just redirects to https://eclipse.org/downloads/packages so the instructions could use the simpler URL instead. This link is also used in 1.2)
as packaged application → as a packaged application
started regular Mac → started via regular Mac

1.2)
The download depend on → The download depends on
zip on Window → zip on Windows

2.1)
store it configuration → store its configuration

4) interchangeable → interchangeably

4.1)
the preferences entry these days seems to be Version Control (Team) instead of just Team

4.2)
This is recommended setting → This is the recommended setting